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OC Reference: Hayate Shizuki by Ruri-dere OC Reference: Hayate Shizuki by Ruri-dere
An OC from a Christian manga story: Read the manga here(=>[Manga Release]The Martyr's Rebellion+[speedpaint] by Ruri-dere
Corresponding Character: Seine Lucius OC Concept Art by Ruri-dere Utau Release OC: Seine Lucius (Wiki Available) by Ruri-dere ( Meant to be an official couple )
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Basic Info of the Character:

Name: Shizuki Hayate 紫月 疾風 (Shizuki means Purple Moon, Hayate: Brutal Storm)
Race: Jap/Chinese
Birthday: Nov.24.1938
Likes: Cats and all fluffy animals
Dislikes: Hypocrites, family traditions, and people with more authority over him

done by sai

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【The Martyr's Rebellion】
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:iconvalasdorian:
This is only my second critique so bear with me here. I think this piece has a beauty within it that transcends the common fallen angel motif. The Outfit that you gave the character gives him an elegance, but also reminds that there is a bestiality beneath it. I love the character because if its light and dark motif further implicating his nature as a fallen angel. the character himself is designed beautifully with traces of elegance and touches of macabre, giving him an unearthly feel. the description however was the key that tied the entire piece together. It gave the character depth and soul which is hard to do. The sacrifice of his light in order to protect and save his love captured me and although cliché to a point it still drives the character well beyond what ordinary artists can do. The character has life and with his design included with the description I must say you have a tremendous amount of skill. Also I love the skull puppet the design and how you laced the character with minute details. I commend you and your otherworldly artistry.
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:icontfp-silentstorm:
the contrast between the light and darkness of the character flows really well together. his grace is shown through his pose and his clothes which was brilliantly done. he does look just a tad feminine but that okay it fits his character. he does have an unearthly feel to him but its original and i love. his clothing is so different from other anime character that I've seem the only thing this actually reminds me of is a nobody from kingdom hearts 2. other than that its awesome and i wouldn't change a thing. XP keep up the great work and always keep your ideas flowin.
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:iconechostrike7034:
EchoStrike7034 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2016  Student General Artist
He reminds me of a cute fluffy bunny! 😊🐇
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:iconvoicelex:
Voicelex Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
I'm a little curious if his coat is fur or feathers.
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:iconruri-dere:
Ruri-dere Featured By Owner Edited Jan 7, 2016
they are really fluffy long furs i would say LOL
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:iconelizabeth-senpai:
Elizabeth-Senpai Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2016  Student Digital Artist
I love the designs of this character, you earn a gold star.
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:iconrobynnphantomhive:
RobynnPhantomhive Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahhhh I saw your artwork on Google Images while searching for a good reference to use as a roleplay character. But being myself, I clicked on the image to view the actual source to see if I can use it for roleplaying, but then I saw your warning and of course respected it~

Seriously though, it's such a lovely character ahhh I envy your art style ;-;
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:iconruri-dere:
Ruri-dere Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2016
thank you QWQ
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:iconrobynnphantomhive:
RobynnPhantomhive Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Looking forward to more of your art and I'm also catching up on Martyr's Rebellion ;; It's so wonderful~
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:iconruri-dere:
Ruri-dere Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2016
thank you XD im updating bit slow atm cuz working on a new comic ...but i iwll resume soon haah!
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:iconpoichansama:
PoiChanSama Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is amaaaaazing!!! I wanna cosplay it!!! omg this is so gonna be my life cosplay goal!!!! HE IS SO BADAAAASS!!! AND MY FAVORITE COLOR!! AND AMAAAZING ART!!! AND THE OUTFIT OMFG SO FANGIRLING RIGHT NOW
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:iconruri-dere:
Ruri-dere Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2015
lol thanks glad u like him XD if you are going to cosplay him i will be more than happy to see it ><!
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:iconpoichansama:
PoiChanSama Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yeees~ one day, one day...one day hwen I have anime merch money ahahahahahahahahahaha *goals*
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:iconklonoastarz:
KlonoaStarz Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG your AMAZING! Clap Could you please tell me how long you have been drawing? 
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:iconyanderelolitax:
YandereLolitaX Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful ^^
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:iconfloraiji30:
floraiji30 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This looks AMAZING!!! XD
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:iconoxy-morons:
Oxy-Morons Featured By Owner Edited Mar 12, 2015  Student Artisan Crafter
DAMN THAT TALLNESS
omg
i think you're the only one who can pull off heels on a guy
haha
hes almost as smexy as my favourite anime character <3
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:iconruri-dere:
Ruri-dere Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2015
lol thanks ? XD though hes not wearing heels...its just i tend to draw a bit of heels...regardless the gender...and this ref is old i need to update a new one soon cuz i couldnt draw bishies properly bak then..
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:iconoxy-morons:
Oxy-Morons Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2015  Student Artisan Crafter
heh, you're welcome

oh
rlly?
because this already looks amazing lol
cant wait for a new one :^D
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:iconryopyoturtle:
RyoPyoTurtle Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
That's so beautiful.
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:iconnixiedrakos:
NixieDrakos Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014
I think I fell in love with Hayate o.o He is smexy i must say x3
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:iconruri-dere:
Ruri-dere Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014
oh thank you so much!im happy u like him!
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:iconnixiedrakos:
NixieDrakos Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014
Your very welcome :D I'm always happy to see OC's everywhere.
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:iconprinsesdaisyfanfan1:
PrinsesDaisyfanfan1 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
He's gorgeous
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:iconphantomrenamon:
phantomrenamon Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014
he is cute
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:iconsundaebunny:
SundaeBunny Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Student General Artist
Also whats the canvas size for this? :o
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:iconsundaebunny:
SundaeBunny Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Student General Artist
EEEPPPPPPPP :heart::heart:
HES PERFECTION!!!!!! I WISH I WAS AS GOOD AS YOUUUU QmQ
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:icon99problemsinstinct:
99problemsINSTINCT Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Student General Artist
I LOVE YOU HAYATE!!!!
goddamnit, why do you have to be so hot!!?
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:iconbelzoot:
Belzoot Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014
HE'S BEAUTIFUL


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:iconstry3mo:
Stry3mo Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I love how ppls OCS r so creative and watnot. I always have trouble with an outfit xD mine r so simple lol I luv this tho
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:iconforsythiaorchid:
ForsythiaOrchid Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I just love the coat design! All your artwork is fabulous!
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:iconmarvel1172:
Marvel1172 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
<smalll>WARNING- Adorable Shota alert!

This is my favorite 
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:iconsuperjustinbros:
Superjustinbros Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great outfit. ^_^
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:iconchains-kun:
ChainS-Kun Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm sure if you ask nicely, an Utaite would provide a voice for him.... but it would probably have to be a relatively unknown Utaite because the big ones like never answer anyone >.>
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:iconkaede-c:
Kaede-C Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful! and cool plot.
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:iconquimeradarkness:
QuimeraDarkness Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
is men or women?
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:iconruri-dere:
Ruri-dere Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013
i dont think u would hav interest in man
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:iconquimeradarkness:
QuimeraDarkness Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
is trueXD
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:iconhellsias:
Hellsias Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
amazing......could u take a request ?(and im sry but i dont have money)
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:iconhinaru-nalu:
hinaru-nalu Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so beautiful! You are such an amazing artist.
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:iconmoonlightnightfire:
moonlightnightfire Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
This art design is freaking wicked!
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:iconquimeradarkness:
QuimeraDarkness Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
O is amazing, WOW!!! awesome
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:iconzemhi:
Zemhi Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow this character looks so awesome and badass! And I love the outfit design! Really amazing! :iconinloveplz:
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:iconchiyor:
ChiyoR Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OOOOOOOHHHHH....
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:iconheroofenelios:
HeroofEnelios Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013   Writer
You're very talented! This is wonderful :)
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:icondetectivegirl15:
detectivegirl15 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
So cool :iconheartrollplz:
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:iconcottoncattailtoony:
CottonCatTailToony Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:) Amazing.
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:iconxelianthought:
xelianthought Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
Cool design! 
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:iconvalkyriereginleif:
ValkyrieReginleif Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
amazing piece of work :D
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:iconminionofitachi:
MinionOfItachi Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
It has the sophistication of light and darkness attribute. A perfect wielder of both power.
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:iconkatiefrog217:
Katiefrog217 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Student General Artist
BEAUTIFUL!
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:iconaliensodajerk:
AlienSodaJerk Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
This is absolutely stunning... And you did this all in SAI? Holy shit.

If I my say, you should totally pursue making this manga someday. If this is the quality of your artwork and the premise of the plot, it'll be fantastic. I'd totally buy it.^^
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