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[Chapter 2 Completed]-Manga:The Martyr's Rebellion by Ruri-dere [Chapter 2 Completed]-Manga:The Martyr's Rebellion by Ruri-dere
Chiyo wow Icon I FINALLY FINISHED THIS COVER ART+CHAPTER 2!!!! CHAPTER IS COMPLETED NOW!!!!Jordan is sad  



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Title: The Martyr's Rebellion
            殉教者の反逆 (Romanji:Junkyosha No Hanyaku)

Genre: Dark Fantasy, Action, Shounen, Humanity,Drama, Comedy, Dark Romance


Please note that the characters in this Manga are not fan based characters, two of them may hav a voice generated by the UTAU synth program, but their voices, design, back story, character has nothing to do with official vocaloid/ UTAU characters or desgin/relationships. 


ART/STORY/Characters (c) Me 
                                        Copyright Statement 3 by Sophibelle
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:iconvivaere:
ooh this is really pretty!!!<333

the first impression is very good, in the sense that the colors do not contrast with each other and are all in harmony: shades of red, purple... all is absolutely perfect !!
I especially like the care that you put in the details.. the rose on the head is very well done, not to mention the sword and the handkerchief ;; v ;; <33
psst i love your character, his design, his voice, all :'D

If I could give you a little advice,, I'd tell you that I think the background is a bit... empty...
that is, with that beautiful figure in the middle, a background color grayed a bit haggard devalues ​​the work...
I would do it in black,, then i would add details like a window in a medieval style (which I think would be fine with Latin crosses that you did c:), then you see ; v ;

I really like the font you've chosen to do the writing, and the idea of ​​making the cross in place of the t goes well with the other crosses of design,,

however, as I have already said it is a beautiful job well done, and you're an artist with a lot of talent <3
keep it up! <33
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:iconjosegoncalo:
josegoncalo Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cool!
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:icongabrielagade:
GabrielaGade Featured By Owner Edited Sep 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
there's a limit of more than 100 words you ashole!!!!!!!!!!!   Rage 
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:iconruri-dere:
Ruri-dere Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014
,,,ummm what ?
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:icontsunyandere:
tsunyandere Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Student Digital Artist
fffff this chapter page is just so beautiful honey :icontearplz:

great job on another wonderful chapter!
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:iconruri-dere:
Ruri-dere Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014
dahsdksaska thank you bby TWT!!!
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:iconthevocaloid1:
TheVocaloid1 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014
Awesome and amazing :wow:
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:iconmitchthe1soul:
MitchThe1Soul Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014   Digital Artist
This is fantastic. That look on the face, the clothes and the design on that sword is great.
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:iconvyslanec:
Vyslanec Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014
I have to say, I've enjoyed it more than I thought I would. It seems you have a big plot waiting to be developed and I can't wait to read it
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:iconruri-dere:
Ruri-dere Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014
haha thank you im glad u enjoyed reading it ;w;...yes this is indeed a big plotted story lmao...it starts off slow and im hoping its not bothering u too much >w<
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:icondaughter-of-bread:
Daughter-Of-Bread Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
dat ending tho
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:iconruri-dere:
Ruri-dere Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014
XD
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:icontsukinekoi:
Tsukinekoi Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
How a trap can dress this fabulous!?
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:iconruri-dere:
Ruri-dere Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014
cuz he's not a trap he's a pretty guy 0n0
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:icontsukinekoi:
Tsukinekoi Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
But if you're confused for a girl at least once, you're officially a trap
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:iconruri-dere:
Ruri-dere Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014
lmao thats too subjective XD...it varies from person to person whether they see the character as a girl or not XP
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:icontsukinekoi:
Tsukinekoi Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ok Ok. Can't wait for the next chapter
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:iconravenna94:
Ravenna94 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Student
This character reminds me a fusion of Lelouch from Code Geass and Alice from Pandora Hearts ^^
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:iconruri-dere:
Ruri-dere Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014
...how?
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:iconravenna94:
Ravenna94 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Student
Well... the colors of the chothes reminds me Lelouch disfarce and the boots, the character pose and the chains reminds me Alice.
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:iconruri-dere:
Ruri-dere Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014
_(:з」∠)_ so it looks unoriginal is what u r hinting ?
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:iconravenna94:
Ravenna94 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Student
No, is original!!! I didn't say you're making plagiarism! I just remember those characters.Nai Surprised Icon brenstar emoticon 4 
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:iconruri-dere:
Ruri-dere Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014
_(:з」∠)_ i never seen alice pose like this ...and dead master has chains too oTL
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:iconclubpenguin1:
clubpenguin1 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
so awesome :)
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:iconruri-dere:
Ruri-dere Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014
thanks!
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:iconclubpenguin1:
clubpenguin1 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
you're welcome :) (Smile) 
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:iconxanimeheartx:
xAnimeHeartx Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful awesome colors really love this :heart:
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:iconruri-dere:
Ruri-dere Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014
thank you!!
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:iconxanimeheartx:
xAnimeHeartx Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome :)
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:iconbokunoai:
bokunoai Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yesss I finally made an Inkblazers acc :la: :la:
Now I can follow yo manga <333 first one in my shelf XD
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:iconruri-dere:
Ruri-dere Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014
thank you for making an account and read and comment im really happy that u r doing this QAQ!!!
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:iconbokunoai:
bokunoai Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw you're welcome ^^ It's no problem at all really 0v0 I really love it~ :heart:
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:iconicemaidenthorn:
icemaidenthorn Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Again, I can't wait to see how it plays out. I hope the dad gets what he deserves and Cyan's alright. Though when he realized that Lucius was a guy, Cyan's reaction was priceless!!!! It's becoming more interesting by the page!!! So well done and I hope to see the next chapter soon!!
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:iconruri-dere:
Ruri-dere Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014
hhahaah thank you so much for ur comment!!! XD im happy that u like it!!!
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:iconkyoris:
Kyoris Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This. Is. OUTSTANDING! :iconsqueeeeplz:
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:iconartistforgod1:
ArtistforGod1 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Student General Artist
Your comics are amazing can't wait for the next update. That last page was hilarious.
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:iconruri-dere:
Ruri-dere Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014
thank you im glad u like it !
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:iconshaozchampion:
ShaozChampion Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Student Digital Artist
o.o wow...that cover is just amazing
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:iconnekodragon12:
nekodragon12 Featured By Owner Edited Sep 14, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Your manga just keeps getting better and better. I just got done finishing chapter 2 . I will keep on supporting it  and i love the storyline
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:iconruri-dere:
Ruri-dere Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014
thank you <333 please do continue reading im happy u r enjoying it!
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:icondrazugan:
Drazugan Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ur manga is awesome! :D
Keep up the good work,
and congratz on the promotion! :) :D
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:iconruri-dere:
Ruri-dere Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014
thanks  a lot!!!
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:iconrosemoon151:
rosemoon151 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Oooo!
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:iconlovebug1088:
lovebug1088 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Student Artist
Do you have a link to the second chapter? all I saw was the prolouge
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:iconruri-dere:
Ruri-dere Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014
IM SOOO SORRY I THINK I COPIED AND PASTED THE WRONG THING LMAO
HERE IT IS:
www.inkblazers.com/read-manga/…
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:iconlovebug1088:
lovebug1088 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Student Artist
thank you. Nevermind though.. I found it. I made an Inkblazers account :)
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:iconruri-dere:
Ruri-dere Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014
lool ok im sooo sorry >< well if inkblazers too troublesome u can use smackjeeves >< the link is in the description of this deviation! thanks !!!!
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sakurako39 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Cyan reaction to Lucius was priceless! XD his manhood I also notice his blood was cyan...
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:iconruri-dere:
Ruri-dere Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014
lmao haha XD ya...its a hint to his name LOL
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:iconriftress:
Riftress Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so gorgeous, I wish I could shade this beautifully!!! ;v; <3
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:iconnijiryuu:
nijiryuu Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This cover reminds me of the "Pandora Hearts" Covers! :) And it looks GREAT!
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